(1)
Thak gaye hum, tujhe yaad karte karte...
Thak gaye hum, tujhe yaad karte karte;
Aisa na ho, tera saath jab phir mile,
Teri yaad hi behtar lagne lage..
(2)
Hum toh ban-na chahte the, aapka sirf ek hissa..
Hum toh ban-na chahte the, aapka sirf ek hissa;
Par yeh kya maloom tha humein
Ki aap toh poore hi, kisi aur ke the..
Thak gaye hum, tujhe yaad karte karte...
Thak gaye hum, tujhe yaad karte karte;
Aisa na ho, tera saath jab phir mile,
Teri yaad hi behtar lagne lage..
(2)
Hum toh ban-na chahte the, aapka sirf ek hissa..
Hum toh ban-na chahte the, aapka sirf ek hissa;
Par yeh kya maloom tha humein
Ki aap toh poore hi, kisi aur ke the..
Very good ! the emotion and simplicity of language is really awesome :) Once you get hold of the meter it will be even more powerful
ReplyDeletedid you write these lines?...touching indeed !!!
ReplyDeleteYes, I did. Just an attempt. Thank you :)
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